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Friday, 3 February 2017

New Story

Here's the 1st chapter of a new story called - Fulfil Potential.
Hint, like most of my books, it's not going to go, in the direction you think it will !




Fulfil Potential

By

Neville Raper



1
Godfrey was a large man, “a large man with a larger heart” his mum always said, and she said a lot of things. There was only one thing that Mum liked to do more than talk was, to feed. Pies, puddings, stews, curries, cakes, she made the lot and, just to be polite, Godfrey ate the lot. As a consequence, he was big and getting bigger.

He was 49 and lived with his widowed Mum in their small two up one down, he was sure if he moved around upstairs more, it would probably fall over. Dad had died at least ten years before of a massive heart attack caused by a landslide of cholesterol and a tsunami of hypertension. Godfrey was sure that in Dad’s veins ran pure custard. He was well aware that he was on the way to Dad’s demise himself, but, couldn’t bring himself to upset his mum.

At 6 foot 6 he towered over his 4 foot 7 Mum, his large beard once a fine roaring ginger was more than tinged with grey, it now had the appearance of rusty candy floss. Given his diet, he always had a rosy complexion. Looking at himself he surmised that this was probably due to high blood pressure and that in any minute his head would blow off in a fountain of haemoglobin.

Although mostly happy with his lot, he knew he had done very little with his life. He was bemoaning this one evening to his mum over a large plate of steaming lasagne.
“I’m an underachiever Mum” he moaned whilst shovelling the cheesy meaty melty mess, “I’ve never met my expectations”.


“No you are not!” scolded Mum “you have a good job down the docks, with lots of responsibility and lots and lots of friends” She tutted. “Everybody loves you and you never let anyone down, so pooey to your expectations, what more can anyone ask for?”

Godfrey spooned in another half a kilo of food, he knew his Mother didn't understand, he’d not done anything with his life. He’d never married, never really had a proper girlfriend. He’d had offers but, suffered from terrible shyness in front of women, except his mum of course.

“Mark my words Godfrey my boy one day you will amount to something, I know it deep down in my waters”

Mum always said “waters” when she wanted to force a point, he had no idea what it meant. He suspected, in his mother’s case it might be cystitis.

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