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Tuesday 31 January 2017

Poetry Tips


New writers often ask where I get inspiration for stories poems etc.
Recently I was given a random sentence and asked to create a piece of work.

The phrase I was given was -

"It was another day with nothing else to do than to shell garden peas."

Here's what I came up with .......


It was another day with nothing else to do
Than to shell garden peas.
Each pea I free from its organic bed
Clears the clouds from my dark head

The pod it pops a party favour
Releasing smell and green flavor
I can eat them raw uncooked and crude
A vegetable cannibal munched and chewed

I thank the stars that my worries melt
With this small action of aggression dealt
The green that’s given from the soil
As simple pea I pod, not toil

And in the end, I bring them to birth
From garden muck a muddy earth
To feed me nutrition and goodness true
To change my colour to green from blue

It was another day with nothing else to do
Than to shell garden peas.

Neville Raper
2016

So a hint is, just pick out a random sentence and have fun !

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